Your cover letter is organized and very professional. You listed a lot of skills that directly relate to this job listing. The connection you made to the hospital was also very good and helped personalize this cover letter. One very small thing to change is that it’s recommended that cover letters follow a four-paragraph approach. This new paragraph could include more skills or the values of the hospital and how they relate to you wanting to work there. I liked how you listed multiple ways to contact you.
I like the approach you took on this resume with including the specific skills UNE instilled in us. You could also consider adding something about the skills you acquired through working with hospice and home health because that shows a more compassionate-based side to you. This cover letter could also be more personalized to the hospital by adding missions or values of the hospital that you plan to uphold. A personal connection to the organization may also give this cover letter an even better chance of being seen. Besides that you seem to have a lot of valuable skills an employer is looking for.
I like how your cover letter is simple and includes your strengths and skills. I also like how you included an email and phone number. I did not do that on my cover letter and will go back and add that in. I think you just need to add hospital values and maybe could include how those values align with your values to make the letter more personal. I also think, once you complete the maternity rotation, you could add a paragraph about your experience, as that would be applicable to an L/D job. Adding one paragraph about the hospital’s and your values is the only thing I would include right now. Great job!
I agree with the others about adding another paragraph, and I think it would be great to make it about your maternity clinical! I like that you put in how to contact you, that could really make you stand out. I might also recommend putting a little about your desire to be a nurse in that last paragraph to really sell yourself to the hiring manager. Great job!!
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Your cover letter is organized and very professional. You listed a lot of skills that directly relate to this job listing. The connection you made to the hospital was also very good and helped personalize this cover letter. One very small thing to change is that it’s recommended that cover letters follow a four-paragraph approach. This new paragraph could include more skills or the values of the hospital and how they relate to you wanting to work there. I liked how you listed multiple ways to contact you.
I like the approach you took on this resume with including the specific skills UNE instilled in us. You could also consider adding something about the skills you acquired through working with hospice and home health because that shows a more compassionate-based side to you. This cover letter could also be more personalized to the hospital by adding missions or values of the hospital that you plan to uphold. A personal connection to the organization may also give this cover letter an even better chance of being seen. Besides that you seem to have a lot of valuable skills an employer is looking for.
I like how your cover letter is simple and includes your strengths and skills. I also like how you included an email and phone number. I did not do that on my cover letter and will go back and add that in. I think you just need to add hospital values and maybe could include how those values align with your values to make the letter more personal. I also think, once you complete the maternity rotation, you could add a paragraph about your experience, as that would be applicable to an L/D job. Adding one paragraph about the hospital’s and your values is the only thing I would include right now. Great job!
I agree with the others about adding another paragraph, and I think it would be great to make it about your maternity clinical! I like that you put in how to contact you, that could really make you stand out. I might also recommend putting a little about your desire to be a nurse in that last paragraph to really sell yourself to the hiring manager. Great job!!